Addiction
As the sky starts to thunder, shadows lurk upon the wall.
I lay alone on the creaking floor, the feeling of my body starving from the hunger of drugs. If I taste or touch the pill I will feel euphoria running through my blood cells, like 1 thousand volts of electricity zapping me, like death’s blow. As I lay dead on the floor I feel myself slowly fading away. But I feel sad because I could never start again and change my past. If I could change myself now I could change the future but I am so addicted to drugs I can’t see the truth. My addiction makes me feel like I am someone else but it also makes me insane like the Joker, the drugs help me feel calm and safe like music. My heart beats faster as I take the single vape of smoke or the one solo pill in me. One taste of my drug and I will fall into my deepest sleep and will stay that way forever. As my spirit lifts away from my body I gently float into a strange bright light. Some addictions can simply be your phone or alcohol but mine is more life threatening because it’s drugs. The message I’m trying to send out is please do not take drugs because you can regret it and you will be so addicted to it you will need medical help.
As the sky starts to thunder, shadows lurk upon the wall.
I lay alone on the creaking floor, the feeling of my body starving from the hunger of drugs. If I taste or touch the pill I will feel euphoria running through my blood cells, like 1 thousand volts of electricity zapping me, like death’s blow. As I lay dead on the floor I feel myself slowly fading away. But I feel sad because I could never start again and change my past. If I could change myself now I could change the future but I am so addicted to drugs I can’t see the truth. My addiction makes me feel like I am someone else but it also makes me insane like the Joker, the drugs help me feel calm and safe like music. My heart beats faster as I take the single vape of smoke or the one solo pill in me. One taste of my drug and I will fall into my deepest sleep and will stay that way forever. As my spirit lifts away from my body I gently float into a strange bright light. Some addictions can simply be your phone or alcohol but mine is more life threatening because it’s drugs. The message I’m trying to send out is please do not take drugs because you can regret it and you will be so addicted to it you will need medical help.
This is a story that I had written to see how my writing could evolve
into a more mature way and to see what I was capable of. Now I'm
going to tell you what my story is about. My story is based on a
persons life and how that person is living with a serious addiction
(drugs). Here it is, Thank you 😃😎🙂😺
Hello Sunipa it is good that you are writing story's to help show people drugs are not good for us. It is awesome you wrote a story about drugs because most people don't write story's about drugs. I just want to know what inspired you to write a story about drugs?
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Hello Sunipa Me Ocyan I like your story because you wrote about drugs and people around the world will probably be reading this and say that this is a good idea.
ReplyDeleteHi Sunipa, this piece of work was very interesting and had me hooked from the beginning through to the end. This was a very mature topic to write about and it really does show what you are capable of when you're writing.
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Kia ora, Sunipa!
ReplyDeleteI love how you wrote this story with the idea of trying to improve your writing skills. The topic you have picked and the way you wrote it could not have been more wonderful!
Keep up the spectacular work!
Hello Sunipa it is really wonderful that you are writing well made story's to be better than before keep up the good work.
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